Process Description – Revision

The challenge of this assignment was to revise poorly written instructions, editing them for readability and usability. To achieve this goal I first examined the process described and then re-wrote the instructions. I began my revision by removing any words that weren’t directions, chunking similar actions, and using headings and numbering to smooth the document’s flow. In doing so I reduced the word count from 250 to 108. I believe this revision example displays my editing prowess and ability to use minimalism in my work.